Reviewer: Bo Wu Review result: Has Nits Hi all, I have been selected as the Operational Directorate reviewer for this draft. Review summary: I believe this document is "Ready with nits". And it would be better readability if the draft had added the reason for "obsolete" rather than "update". comments below: This draft obsoletes RFC8210 and section 1.2 list the following changes: 1, new sections 5.12 ASPA PDU type 2, section 11 two ROA PDU race conditions 3, The protocol version number incremented from 1 (one) to 2 (two) 4, the Section 7 has been updated accordingly suggestions: - Adds the reason why choosing "obsolete" RFC 8210 instead of "update", since the protocol version has been updated from 1 to 2 - The title "Protocol Version Negotiation" to be added to section 7 description. - Some major changes to other sections to be added: 5.1 Flags adds ASPA PDU specific processing 5.8. End of Data adds clarification text on version 1 changes 14. IANA Considerations -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
