Peter, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document. Lars > On 2022-1-30, at 23:25, Peter Yee via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Peter Yee > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-tcpm-ao-test-vectors-05 > Reviewer: Peter Yee > Review Date: 2022-01-30 > IETF LC End Date: 2022-02-01 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: This document supplies test vectors for the MTI authentication > algorithms used in the TCP Authentication Option. There are a few nits that > should be corrected prior to publication. I'm not equipped to validate the test > vectors themselves and did not attempt to do so. [Ready with nits.] > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > > Page 2, Abstract: move this entire section before the "Status of this Memo" > section, as required by RFC 7322, section 4. > > Page 4, first full paragraph: move "[RFC6978]" after "experimental extension" > to avoid confusion. > > Page 10, section 5, 1st paragraph: add a period at the end of the sentence. > > Page 20, section 7, 1st sentence: add a period at the end of the sentence. > > Page 24, section 8.2: add a comma after "e.g.". > > Page 25, section 8.4, 2nd bullet item: change "to" to "in". > > Page 25, section 8.4, 3rd bullet item: change first "to" to "in". > > Page 25, section 9, 2nd paragraph: between the usage in section 3.1.1 and here, > choose a consistent case for "master_key". I know, RFC 5926 (Master_Key) and > RFC 5925 (master_key) are not consistent between themselves. > > > > _______________________________________________ > tcpm mailing list > tcpm@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/tcpm
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