Re: [Last-Call] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpapi-linkset-06

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Just for the record, the linkset draft is now proposed standard, based on the issue Christer raised.

On 3/1/22, 9:57 AM, "Lars Eggert" <lars@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

    Christer, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

    Lars


    > On 2022-1-11, at 0:26, Christer Holmberg via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
    > 
    > Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
    > Review result: Ready with Issues
    > 
    > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
    > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
    > by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
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    > 
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    > 
    > Document: draft-ietf-httpapi-linkset-06
    > Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
    > Review Date: 2022-01-10
    > IETF LC End Date: 2022-01-19
    > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
    > 
    > Summary: Technically I don't have any major issue.  However, I do have a minor
    > technical, one administrative, and some editorial, comments.
    > 
    > Major issues:
    > 
    > Q1: The draft is intended to be published as Informational RFC. That sounds a
    > little strange to me. Could you please explain what the reason is?
    > 
    > Minor issues:
    > 
    > Q2: The document defines the "application/linkset+json" format, and indicates
    > that it can also be used for JSON-LD. What is the reason for not defining a
    > separate format for JSON-LD? Separate formats ("application/json" and
    > "application/ld+json") have previously been defined.
    > 
    > Nits/editorial comments:
    > 
    > Q3: The document has long sentences like "One serializes links in the same
    > format as used in HTTP the Link header field". Couldn't one just say "based on
    > the syntax of the HTTP Link header field", or something like that?
    > 
    > Q4: The document talks about "document format". People familiar with HTTP are
    > probably familiar with that terminology, but I think it would be good to add a
    > reference on first occurrence.
    > 
    > Q5: In Section 1, you talk about serializing links as JSON objects. Should it
    > be JSON strings, or something? JSON object is not a serialization.
    > 
    > 
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