I don't know what "IANA clients" means, but this is the diff I have so far:
The IANA clients are ICANN for domains, the RIRs for IP addresses and
ASNs, and the IETF for protocol parameters. Don't think you need to go
into that much detail, though.
You should also say that the Trust owns the copyrights to RFCs and to
works of the IETF. Those aren't licenses, they're the actual copyrights.
The text about licenses for I-D's is correct.
; g diff
diff --git a/draft-rsalz-2028bis.md b/draft-rsalz-2028bis.md
index 447f115..7f2429c 100644
--- a/draft-rsalz-2028bis.md
+++ b/draft-rsalz-2028bis.md
@@ -304,12 +304,14 @@ and operation of the IRTF, the ISRG, and its RGs may be found in
## The IETF Trust
The IETF Trust is the legal owner of a number of intellectual
-properties for the IETF, IRTF and other related organizations (such as IANA).
-This includes the IETF trademarks, or
+properties for the IETF, IRTF, and IAB.
+This includes the IETF trademarks, and
copyright licenses for IETF contributions including Internet Drafts. The
principles for the copyright licenses are described in {{IPRRIGHTS1}}
and {{COPYRIGHT}}, and the licenses themselves are documented in the
[Trust Legal Provisions](https://trustee.ietf.org/documents/trust-legal-provisions/).
+It also currently owns IANA's domain names and trademarks through an
+agreement with the IANA clients.
The Trustees that govern the Trust are selected from the IETF community, as
described in {{TRUSTEES}}.
Regards,
John Levine, johnl@xxxxxxxxx, Taughannock Networks, Trumansburg NY
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