Re: [Last-Call] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-19

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Re-,

Thank you for the follow-up.

Please see below for the comment about pipes. 

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : James <james.ietf@xxxxxxxxx>
> Envoyé : lundi 17 janvier 2022 15:19
> À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucadair@xxxxxxxxxx>
> Cc : art@xxxxxxxx; dots@xxxxxxxx; draft-ietf-dots-
> telemetry.all@xxxxxxxx; last-call@xxxxxxxx
> Objet : Re: Artart last call review of draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-19
> 
> Thanks for the changes. A few comments also inline.
> 
> - J
> 
> > On 17 Jan 2022, at 11:06, <mohamed.boucadair@xxxxxxxxxx>
> <mohamed.boucadair@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> >
> > Hi James,
> >
> > Thank you for the review.
> >
> > Please see inline.
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Med
> >
> >> -----Message d'origine-----
> >> De : James Gruessing via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> Envoyé :
> >> samedi 15 janvier 2022 19:50 À : art@xxxxxxxx Cc : dots@xxxxxxxx;
> >> draft-ietf-dots-telemetry.all@xxxxxxxx; last- call@xxxxxxxx Objet :
> >> Artart last call review of draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-19
> >>
> >> Reviewer: James Gruessing
> >> Review result: Ready with Nits
> >>
> >> This is my review of draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-19 as requested by
> >> ARTART chairs.
> >>
> >> Overall this is a well written document that explains its purpose,
> >> rationale, and technical details for someone like myself with no
> >> previous knowledge of DOTS or its underlying dependent protocols. As
> >> such my focus in this review has been looking at the readability of
> >> the document through the eyes of a future implementer.
> >
> > [Med] Thanks.
> >
> >>
> >> Comments:
> >>
> >> 3.2 - At a few points in this section, the concept of "measurements
> >> should be taken when traffic is 'normal'" is repeated a few times and
> >> done in a way not as clear as it could be. The authors should
> >> consider editing this section to be more concise and avoid
> repetition.
> >
> > [Med] Found and fixed one sentence that I think is redundant. Not sure
> if you have identified others.
> 
> [James] I haven't identified anything else specific, however your change
> is a good improvement.
> 
> >
> >>
> >> 3.3 - Perhaps a clear definition for the word "pipe" belongs in the
> >> terminology section? Although it may appear obvious as to what it
> >> means, it is jargon that is not used in RFC 9132 nor 9133. Consider
> >> that a client split with multiple interfaces/networks/DOTS domains
> >> etc may affect interpretation of the word, and thus the potential
> >> value it should calculate and send.
> >
> > [Med] Sure. Added a new entry to Section 2.
> 
> [James] Thank you, that's clearer. As an aside to this definition,
> around 6.2 and later I cannot find any text that covers clients not
> sending a pipe capacity figure greater than actual* available capacity -
> in a simple example, a client with 1Gbit probably shouldn't announce
> 10Gbit. Did I miss it, or is that something to consider?
> 

[Med] What is advertised is not necessarily a local interface of the client, but the "pipe" of the client **domain**. Think about cases where the DOTS client is not embedded in a router. We don't include checks against signaled pipe information because how a client retrieves ( or is provided with) the information to signal is deployment-specific.   



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