Robert, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document. Lars > On 2021-11-11, at 23:29, Robert Sparks via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Robert Sparks > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-dispatch-javascript-mjs-10 > Reviewer: Robert Sparks > Review Date: 2021-11-11 > IETF LC End Date: 2021-11-15 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: Ready (but with nits) for publication as an Informational RFC > > The number of messages in the archive about the draft are impressive, if not > daunting. Apologies if any of my nits tread old ground. > > I'm glad this has seen attention from many people better with i18n than I am. > > I'm curious why the registrations choose to declare the .mjs extension in > anything but the now preferred type. If they're in all the obsoleted type > registrations because they're used in the wild with those types, fine. But if > it was a template replication process that put them there, maybe reconsider? > > I agree with Mark that the form and repetition of variants of 'not part of this > document' is unusual. Consider saying it less, and maybe consolidating what you > do need to say. > > There are a few places where the document says implementations or scripts MUST > consider something. Neither of those things can consider. Please consider > rephrasing those to speak of the implementers or script creators. This is also > not a great use of 2119/8174 terms. Think about using plain words instead. > > The last sentence of the second paragraph of section 3 doesn't fit with the > first. Perhaps it should stand alone. > > Please point explicitly to the types registry in the text of the document. > > Micro-nit: search for timin`g > > > > -- > last-call mailing list > last-call@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
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