Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-dispatch-javascript-mjs-10 Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review Date: 2021-11-11 IETF LC End Date: 2021-11-15 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Ready (but with nits) for publication as an Informational RFC The number of messages in the archive about the draft are impressive, if not daunting. Apologies if any of my nits tread old ground. I'm glad this has seen attention from many people better with i18n than I am. I'm curious why the registrations choose to declare the .mjs extension in anything but the now preferred type. If they're in all the obsoleted type registrations because they're used in the wild with those types, fine. But if it was a template replication process that put them there, maybe reconsider? I agree with Mark that the form and repetition of variants of 'not part of this document' is unusual. Consider saying it less, and maybe consolidating what you do need to say. There are a few places where the document says implementations or scripts MUST consider something. Neither of those things can consider. Please consider rephrasing those to speak of the implementers or script creators. This is also not a great use of 2119/8174 terms. Think about using plain words instead. The last sentence of the second paragraph of section 3 doesn't fit with the first. Perhaps it should stand alone. Please point explicitly to the types registry in the text of the document. Micro-nit: search for timin`g -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
