David, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document. Lars > On 2021-2-5, at 23:44, David Schinazi via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: David Schinazi > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-oam-req-frmwk-04 > Reviewer: David Schinazi > Review Date: 2021-02-05 > IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-16 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: Thank you for a well-written document. > It introduces a lot of terminology I wasn't used to, > but does a good job of explaining it. > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > - The abstract defines all the acronyms (which is great) except PBB, could it define that one too? > - Section 2.1 doesn't really explain what a "P node" is. > > > -- > last-call mailing list > last-call@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
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