| Ines, thanks for your review. Balázs, thanks for your responses. I entered a No Objection ballot.
Alissa
Hi Balázs,
Thank you for your clarifications. It is Ok for me.
BR, Ines Hi Ines,
Many thanks for your review.
See my reactions and proposed updates below.
Thanks
Bala'zs
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Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Document: draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-tsn-05
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2021-02-05
IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-05
IESG Telechat date: 2021-02-18
Summary:
This document specifies the Deterministic Networking MPLS data plane when operating over a TSN sub-network.
I have some minor questions to the authors.
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- Page 5: Could you please describe what the "TSN treatment" comprise?
<Bala'zs> TSN treatment means to execute TSN functionalities during forwarding. I will extend the text
OLD TEXT:
... All these functions have to identify flows those
require TSN treatment.
NEW TEXT:
... All these functions have to identify flows those
require TSN treatment (i.e., applying TSN functions
during forwarding).
END
- Are the security considerations the same for TSN-unaware that are for TSN-aware nodes? - How are the privacy considerations for those? It would be nice to mention explicitly how or where (I-D.ietf-detnet-security???) the privacy considerations are addressed for TSN-unaware and TSN-aware nodes
<Bala'zs> The I-D.ietf-detnet-security contains DetNet specific security considerations. TSN-unaware nodes are out-of-scope in the draft. TSN-aware nodes are part of both the MPLS and the TSN domain, where both domain has its own security considerations, which must be applied.
Thank you for this document
Ines.
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