| I’ve started addressing the issues you each raised in a separate branch in the GitHub repo. You can see all the commits with my proposed amendments and the issues they address here https://github.com/ietf-llc/strategy-2020-consultation/commits/latest-updates-from-consultation/DRAFT%20Strategic%20Plan%202020.md I’m about 50% of the way through and I started with issues affecting the text from the top down so I have addressed everything before the transformations section. There’s only one issue so far that I don’t think I should address, which is adding mission statements for IAB etc, as raised by Martin. My reason being that doing so would distract from the narrow scope of the strategy, which has been clarified quite a bit by additions in response to other feedback: Jay |
