This includes a copy of Gen-ART review comments for TFRC.bis, Gorry ---- I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-dccp-rfc3448bis-06.txt Reviewer: David L. Black Review Date: 19 May 2008 IESG Telechat date: 22 May 2008 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC. This is a well-written detailed draft updating an existing RFC on rate-based congestion control. It has clearly had a high level of review by congestion control experts. I have only done a generalist review, and in particular have not checked the equations and pseudo-code in detail. I trust that the authors and reviewers in the DCCP WG to have done this level of review, as indicated by the change history. idnits 2.08.10 found 1 line that was 1 character too long and pointed out that a -04 version of the rfc2581bis draft exists. Neither of these need attention, as the RFC Editor will handle them in the normal course of editing activity. Thanks, --David ---------------------------------------------------- David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786 black_david@xxxxxxx Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754 ----------------------------------------------------
