Hi David, On checking the pseudo-code and equations -- I have completed writing an implementation of CCID 3 based on this draft (still debugging it though), and have found the equations and pseudo-code to be accurate and helpful. The latest version of the draft does include feedback from that implementation. Tom P. > -----Original Message----- > From: dccp-bounces@xxxxxxxx [mailto:dccp-bounces@xxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of > Gorry Fairhurst > Sent: Tuesday, May 20, 2008 3:01 PM > To: dccp@xxxxxxxx > Subject: [Fwd: FW: Gen-ART review ofdraft-ietf-dccp-rfc3448bis- > 06.txt] > > This includes a copy of Gen-ART review comments for TFRC.bis, > > > Gorry > > ---- > > > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) > reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd > or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > > Document: draft-ietf-dccp-rfc3448bis-06.txt > Reviewer: David L. Black > Review Date: 19 May 2008 > IESG Telechat date: 22 May 2008 > > Summary: > This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC. > > This is a well-written detailed draft updating an existing > RFC on rate-based congestion control. It has clearly had a > high level of review by congestion control experts. > > I have only done a generalist review, and in particular have > not checked the equations and pseudo-code in detail. I trust > that the authors and reviewers in the DCCP WG to have done > this level of review, as indicated by the change history. > > idnits 2.08.10 found 1 line that was 1 character too long > and pointed out that a -04 version of the rfc2581bis draft > exists. Neither of these need attention, as the RFC Editor > will handle them in the normal course of editing activity. > > Thanks, > --David > ---------------------------------------------------- > David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer > EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 > +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786 > black_david@xxxxxxx Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754 > ----------------------------------------------------
