On Sat, Mar 21, 2009 at 05:28:32AM +0100, Christian Couder wrote: > Le vendredi 20 mars 2009, David J. Mellor a écrit : > > [...] > > > @@ -94,14 +95,14 @@ the bisection state). > > Bisect visualize > > ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ > > > > -During the bisection process, you issue the command: > > +To see the currently remaining suspects in 'gitk', the following command > > +is issued during the bisection process: > > I think it's better to avoid the passive tone, for example like this: > > "To see the currently remaining suspects in 'gitk', you issue the following > command during the bisection process:" Agreed, but drop the "you" too. --b. > > > ------------ > > $ git bisect visualize > > ------------ > > [...] > > > @@ -173,8 +175,8 @@ using the "'<commit1>'..'<commit2>'" notation. For > > example: $ git bisect skip v2.5..v2.6 > > ------------ > > > > -would mean that no commit between `v2.5` excluded and `v2.6` included > > -can be tested. > > +The effect of this would be that no commit between `v2.5` excluded and > > +`v2.6` included could be tested. > > I'd prefer something like: > > "This tells the bisect process that no commit between `v2.5` excluded and > `v2.6` included can be tested." > > Otherwise it looks good to me. > > Thanks, > Christian. > > -- > To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe git" in > the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe git" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html
