On 03/20/2009 09:28 PM, Christian Couder wrote:
Le vendredi 20 mars 2009, David J. Mellor a écrit :
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@@ -94,14 +95,14 @@ the bisection state).
Bisect visualize
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-During the bisection process, you issue the command:
+To see the currently remaining suspects in 'gitk', the following command
+is issued during the bisection process:
I think it's better to avoid the passive tone, for example like this:
"To see the currently remaining suspects in 'gitk', you issue the following
command during the bisection process:"
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$ git bisect visualize
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@@ -173,8 +175,8 @@ using the "'<commit1>'..'<commit2>'" notation. For
example: $ git bisect skip v2.5..v2.6
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-would mean that no commit between `v2.5` excluded and `v2.6` included
-can be tested.
+The effect of this would be that no commit between `v2.5` excluded and
+`v2.6` included could be tested.
I'd prefer something like:
"This tells the bisect process that no commit between `v2.5` excluded and
`v2.6` included can be tested."
Otherwise it looks good to me.
Thanks,
Christian.
I will send a patch correcting this in my next cycle of documentation
patches. I should send them some time later today.
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