On Tue, 2018-07-17 at 14:48 -0700, Adam Williamson wrote: > I instinctively like the non-split form here because, to me, it > emphasizes more clearly that "appropriately" applies to all three > actions. To be clearer here, consider these options: "...to appropriately install, remove and update..." "...to install, remove and update appropriately..." "...appropriately to install, remove and update..." To me, it's at least possible that someone might read the first as if the "appropriately" applies only to the action "install", and the second as if the "appropriately" applies only to the action "update". The third, however, can't really be understood in any way *other* than with "appropriately" applying to all three actions. -- Adam Williamson Fedora QA Community Monkey IRC: adamw | Twitter: AdamW_Fedora | XMPP: adamw AT happyassassin . net http://www.happyassassin.net _______________________________________________ test mailing list -- test@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to test-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/test@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx/message/MB53OMLJECCQMXRC3KKQSXHFXCNENZBL/
