On 02/07/2016 11:32 AM, charles profitt wrote: > I just finished editing the Neville Cross article. I want to thank both > Neville and William Moreno for working on the article; excellent work > gentlemen. > > Here is the link to the article for final review before publication. > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=11601&preview_id=11601 Overall, the article looks excellent to me as well. Thanks to all involved in putting this article together! Thanks Neville, William, and Charles. :) I only have one lingering thought on this article -- in the last section about Software, there are some pretty sharp words said about GNOME. While I completely agree that constructive criticism is important and it is a good thing to voice concerns, I don't feel like this Magazine article is the best place to do it. Instead of focusing on the negatives of GNOME, I would try to replace it with some positive thoughts either on the desktop or another environment. Using positive words over the negative will have a more resounding impact on the reader and will also reflect well on Fedora. Since there is such a large readership base for the Magazine, I could imagine someone reading the last bit and thinking, "Oh, even Fedora contributors don't even like Fedora!" Obviously this isn't true if you read the rest of the article, but it can be easy for someone who is skimming to take things out of context. However, like I said, overall, I think this is a fantastic article and is a great testament to the Fedora community. With a little bit of rephrasing to the bottom portion, I think this article will be ready to ship on Friday. -- Cheers, Justin W. Flory jflory7@xxxxxxxxx
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