On Tue, Oct 20, 2015 at 12:34:31AM -0400, Jon Stanley wrote: > On Mon, Oct 19, 2015 at 12:40 AM, Ryan Lerch <rlerch@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Someone must have already granted you access -- you are listed as an author, > > so you should be able to edit away! > > Cool, thanks! Apparently that is now part 5. Can someone take a look > and make sure that I'm on the right track here? It's slightly more > than I thought that it would be, since I'm going into fairly > considerable detail. Some of it may be covered by other parts of the > series, and some may just be me pontificating on how great systemd is > :). I just want to make sure general style is OK before I flesh out > other parts of the article. Hi Jon, I took a look and I liked the way it was going. It's a difficult topic, easy to get complex quickly. We have a while before this one will come up for final review, so if you don't mind, I'll do a more thorough feedback in a little bit. :-) -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com -- marketing mailing list marketing@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx List info or to change your subscription: https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing
