In looking at this article, I can see that we did not really scope it well. There's an *awful* lot to cover in one article, and not much in the way of a flow for you to be able to follow. Because our audience includes people not necessarily familiar with units or boot targets, we probably need some coverage of those topics. It's OK to go into more simpler explanations if needed. I tried explaining this in an editing comment in the article, but I'll continue working on it tomorrow to see if we can get the scope cut down. Then we would try to do an additional article (maybe even two) to cover the parts that may not fit well here. We basically set the bar way too high on this article, and you did a good job finding information to help flesh it out! Paul On Mon, Oct 26, 2015 at 01:59:37PM -0400, Bryan Sutherland wrote: > Hey Paul, > I have added more to the article (after blowing up 90 minutes worth of > additions thanks to an errant ^w) and will have the remained wrapped up in > the next 2-3 hours. I have backed out to remove the lock in the meantime. > My additional work will be around target and path units, though I will add > a little more the the mount and automount sections. Please let me know how > it looks thus far (and if you have suggestions for me), and how that sounds. > > Cheers > Bryan > > On Mon, Oct 26, 2015 at 10:10 AM, Paul W. Frields <stickster@xxxxxxxxx> > wrote: > > > Hi Bryan, > > > > I didn't see any changes in the article, but as of this morning the > > article status shows it's still locked and being edited by you. We > > were hoping to publish on Wednesday, so I could really use the > > finished draft ASAP. If you're not going to finish please say so and > > I'll pull the lock and try to complete it. > > > > Paul > > > > On Thu, Oct 22, 2015 at 08:41:05PM -0400, Bryan Sutherland wrote: > > > Hi Paul > > > I will be able to flesh the rest out tomorrow in the AM. > > > > > > Thanks > > > > > > On Thu, Oct 22, 2015 at 5:25 PM, Paul W. Frields <stickster@xxxxxxxxx> > > > wrote: > > > > > > > On Wed, Oct 14, 2015 at 05:58:17PM -0400, Bryan Sutherland wrote: > > > > > Hey Ryan, > > > > > The first draft of the Part 2 article has been posted up. There is > > still > > > > > some work to do though :) > > > > > > > > > > FYI, you can find my article scribbles here: > > > > https://pagure.io/fmag-articles > > > > > > > > Hi Bryan, did you want to add some more to the sections on target, > > > > mount, automount, and path units? I could review this tomorrow but it > > > > would be great to just hit a finished draft all at once for you. > > > > > > > > -- > > > > Paul W. Frields > > http://paul.frields.org/ > > > > gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 > > > > http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ > > > > The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com > > > > > > > > > -- > > > marketing mailing list > > > marketing@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > List info or to change your subscription: > > > https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing > > > > > > -- > > Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ > > gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 > > http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ > > The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com > > > -- > marketing mailing list > marketing@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > List info or to change your subscription: > https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com -- marketing mailing list marketing@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx List info or to change your subscription: https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing
