On 01/12/2015 11:15 AM, Ankur Sinha wrote: > On Mon, 2015-01-12 at 09:54 -0500, Joe Brockmeier wrote: >> Sounds great. > > I'll start working on this too. > > > Would anyone have any other feedback on the workstation flyer, or should > I remove the draft sign and put it up on the wiki if it's all OK? > > https://fedorahosted.org/marketing-team/ticket/186 Why is the email on the front of the flyer for marketing@ instead of the desktop@ mailing list? "That's probably why Fedora has been called the best of HiDPI" -- by whom? Some sort of reference there would probably be good. On p2, I'd try to get rid of the hyphenation. A little more text on DevAssistant would be good. "And because the future of installations is not optical discs..." <- I'm assuming this is talking about creating USB images from Fedora. It may be confusing if users are on Mac OS X or Windows going to Linux. "With the ability to run HTML5 web services in a chromeless window" How do I use this feature? Best, jzb -- Joe Brockmeier | Principal Cloud & Storage Analyst jzb@xxxxxxxxxx | http://community.redhat.com/ Twitter: @jzb | http://dissociatedpress.net/
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