On Mon, Jan 12, 2015 at 06:24:43PM -0500, Joe Brockmeier wrote: > On 01/12/2015 11:15 AM, Ankur Sinha wrote: > > On Mon, 2015-01-12 at 09:54 -0500, Joe Brockmeier wrote: > >> Sounds great. > > > > I'll start working on this too. > > > > > > Would anyone have any other feedback on the workstation flyer, or should > > I remove the draft sign and put it up on the wiki if it's all OK? > > > > https://fedorahosted.org/marketing-team/ticket/186 > > Why is the email on the front of the flyer for marketing@ instead of the > desktop@ mailing list? > > "That's probably why Fedora has been called the best of HiDPI" -- by > whom? Some sort of reference there would probably be good. This was raised in an earlier thread. It's paraphrased from a Phoronix article originally becuase some folks objected to quoting them directly. > On p2, I'd try to get rid of the hyphenation. > > A little more text on DevAssistant would be good. > > "And because the future of installations is not optical discs..." > > <- I'm assuming this is talking about creating USB images from Fedora. > It may be confusing if users are on Mac OS X or Windows going to Linux. > > "With the ability to run HTML5 web services in a chromeless window" > > How do I use this feature? > > Best, > > jzb > -- > Joe Brockmeier | Principal Cloud & Storage Analyst > jzb@xxxxxxxxxx | http://community.redhat.com/ > Twitter: @jzb | http://dissociatedpress.net/ > > -- > marketing mailing list > marketing@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > List info or to change your subscription: > https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com -- marketing mailing list marketing@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx List info or to change your subscription: https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing
