On Mon, 2015-01-12 at 18:24 -0500, Joe Brockmeier wrote: > Why is the email on the front of the flyer for marketing@ instead of > the > desktop@ mailing list? Good question. Well, mktg because we made the flyer, not the desktop because that list is more for development, I think? I could change this either to desktop or the users list, which is where troubleshooting questions go. What do you think? I could ask the workstation folks what they prefer too. > > "That's probably why Fedora has been called the best of HiDPI" -- by > whom? Some sort of reference there would probably be good. The entire text is taken from the workstation release announcement - verbatim: http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/F21_release_announcement#Fedora_21_Workstation The discussion about it here suggested that Phoronix not be mentioned: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/pipermail/desktop/2014-September/010587.html > > On p2, I'd try to get rid of the hyphenation. I'll look into this. (LaTeX handles hyphenation itself.) > > A little more text on DevAssistant would be good. Sure. > > "And because the future of installations is not optical discs..." > > <- I'm assuming this is talking about creating USB images from Fedora. > It may be confusing if users are on Mac OS X or Windows going to > Linux. Well, this flyer isn't exactly for the novice user. It's targeted at the audience that the workstation folks picked, which is more devs. I can remove the line completely, it doesn't really contribute much IMHO. > > "With the ability to run HTML5 web services in a chromeless window" > > How do I use this feature? Well, it's via gnome-software and epiphany - I haven't really been able to find an official documentation page for this, which is probably why there isn't a link anywhere that this is mentioned. I'll look harder. An explanation will require a lot more space. This seems to be the best description at the moment: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Web_(web_browser)#Web_Applications_mode Almost everything else that I find is a blog post someone has made. Thanks for the feedback. I'll make some changes and post an updated version asap. -- Thanks, Regards, Ankur Sinha "FranciscoD" http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/User:Ankursinha
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