On Thu, Aug 13, 2009 at 10:55:17AM -0400, Máirín Duffy wrote: > -------- Forwarded Message -------- > > From: Máirín Duffy <mairin@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> > > To: For discussions about marketing and expanding the Fedora user base > > <fedora-marketing-list@xxxxxxxxxx> > > Subject: Re: Summit USB key doco > > Date: Thu, 13 Aug 2009 10:39:27 -0400 > > > > On Wed, 2009-08-12 at 19:10 -0400, Paul W. Frields wrote: > > > I posted the document here, and if you see something vital missing > > > please let me know. The finished product is due shortly. > > > > woooo Scribus :) > > > > I copied the files into the design team collateral dir, I hope you don't > > mind! > > > > http://fedorapeople.org/groups/designteam/Fedora%20Collateral/USB%20Key% > > 20Documentation/ > > > > Also, some quick feedback, take it or leave it :) None of it is > > critical, more stylistic so it may not be worth changing: > > > > "You can even make changes as you go to make Fedora suit your needs." > > > > there's two makes here, maybe instead "You can even make changes as you > > go to adapt Fedora to your needs." > > > > "PowerPC based" > > > > maybe should be "PowerPC-based" > > > > "check out all the latest summit information through our handy > > download page." > > > > might want to capitalize - "Summit" > > > > "Just doubleclick the "Red Hat > > Summit 2009" icon on the desktop." > > > > might be cool to throw a screenshot of the icon in so it's blazingly > > obvious Thanks Mo, I'm going to see if I can get the fixes in before press time! -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ irc.freenode.net: stickster @ #fedora-docs, #fedora-devel, #fredlug -- Fedora-marketing-list mailing list Fedora-marketing-list@xxxxxxxxxx https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-marketing-list
