-------- Forwarded Message -------- > From: Máirín Duffy <mairin@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> > To: For discussions about marketing and expanding the Fedora user base > <fedora-marketing-list@xxxxxxxxxx> > Subject: Re: Summit USB key doco > Date: Thu, 13 Aug 2009 10:39:27 -0400 > > On Wed, 2009-08-12 at 19:10 -0400, Paul W. Frields wrote: > > I posted the document here, and if you see something vital missing > > please let me know. The finished product is due shortly. > > woooo Scribus :) > > I copied the files into the design team collateral dir, I hope you don't > mind! > > http://fedorapeople.org/groups/designteam/Fedora%20Collateral/USB%20Key% > 20Documentation/ > > Also, some quick feedback, take it or leave it :) None of it is > critical, more stylistic so it may not be worth changing: > > "You can even make changes as you go to make Fedora suit your needs." > > there's two makes here, maybe instead "You can even make changes as you > go to adapt Fedora to your needs." > > "PowerPC based" > > maybe should be "PowerPC-based" > > "check out all the latest summit information through our handy > download page." > > might want to capitalize - "Summit" > > "Just doubleclick the "Red Hat > Summit 2009" icon on the desktop." > > might be cool to throw a screenshot of the icon in so it's blazingly > obvious > > ~m -- Fedora-marketing-list mailing list Fedora-marketing-list@xxxxxxxxxx https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-marketing-list
