Thank you Peter for the feedback.
There are many things that bother me.
One, is not related to documentation
Fedora media writer should also include a Fedora ISO download function. With an enhanced Fedora media writer, I would use it to click onto an ISO image to download, provide it with the USB device or DVD, and let it do both download and write to USB. It should also check the received iso for download errors.
Here are my grammar rules from my schooling.
write on xxx On should be replaced with about or onto as write about xxx or write onto xxx
I write onto a paper. On can be used as He is on topic.
On vs onto, put the book onto the table. Where is the book? it is on the table.
Similar distinction between "in and into"
In many places the word see xxxxx should be refer to xxxxx
see implies immediate. refer to is an optional deferred action.
American
There are five cars to choose from.
International English
There are five cars from which to choose. or
You can choose from among five cars.
Action statements are better than passive.
Download xyz followed by abc to create the USB.
better than
The USB can be created by downloading xyz followed by abc.
My sources.
English writing class in public school. And also "IEEE engineering writing and speech guides."
Just my thoughts.
Regards
Grandpa Leslie
Leslie Satenstein
Montréal Québec, Canada
On Monday, June 21, 2021, 8:20:09 a.m. EDT, Peter Boy <pboy@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> Am 21.06.2021 um 13:42 schrieb Leslie S Satenstein <lsatenstein@xxxxxxxxx>:
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> Downloading Fedora
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> Fedora Editions
> Fedora provides three primary Editions. tailored for some specific use cases. The site, https://getfedora.org offers Fedora Cloud for scalable infrastructure, Fedora Server for organizational infrastructure, and Fedora Workstation for the developer and desktop user.
Just a remark. That section is wrong for several releases now. As a look at https://getfedora.org confirms it should read:
Fedora Editions
Fedora provides three primary Editions. tailored for some specific use cases. The site, https://getfedora.org
Cloud is not offered on getfedora.
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