Hi Chris
I browsed the documentation link and drilled down a bit. I do have a few comments.
It seems to me that the documentation is written for a reader or user already familiar with Fedora
Terms such as dnf, and some others are mentioned, without being defined.
For example, I did not find a sentence that says "The dnf utility provided by Fedora is multipurpose, and provides
the user with a software package maintenance and as a system upgrade tool. dnf is included with current Fedora
distributions.
Regards
Leslie
Leslie Satenstein
Montréal Québec, Canada
On Sunday, June 20, 2021, 10:15:45 p.m. EDT, Chris Murphy <lists@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
"Fedora rawhide User Documentation"
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