On 09/28/2009 08:14 AM, Douglas Silas Hensley wrote: >> > If you have the chance to look over the much-modified Part I, I'd love > to hear it. Aside from a few small things, it's completely updated (with > a completely new chapter on PackageKit): > > http://dsilas.fedorapeople.org/Deployment_Guide/en-US/html-single/index.html#pt-pkg-management Much better. Few more notes: All screenshots should use the default theme (and font) RPM is both the name of the low level tool as well as the format. So when you use the term, it would be useful to note the context. PackageKit is the underlying framework. Do not confuse it with the frontends (gnome-packagekit or kpackagekit). Tolerant option is a no-op. It is only retained for backward compatibility. Don't mention it in the guide at all. In a multi-lib system, you can use yum install package.arch, ex: gtk2.i386 to install the package for a specific arch. For package group installation, I prefer something like # yum -v grouplist | grep -i kde # yum install @kde-desktop It is much easier to type and consistent with the kickstart format. @ denotes a group operation and yum can use a group id (kde-desktop) instead of the full name. Yum plugins should be covered. You might want to add a note on gpg signatures in the first section itself. It is critically important that users understand the security reasons for it. For creating a repo, createrepo -d is much better since it creates the sqlite database which speeds up yum operations. Delta RPM (presto plugin, createrepo options) can be explained in more detail. RPM section should warn against using --nodeps. Cover the difference between rpmsave and rpmnew (http://www-uxsup.csx.cam.ac.uk/~jw35/docs/rpm_config.html) That's it for now. Rahul -- fedora-docs-list mailing list fedora-docs-list@xxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe: https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-docs-list