On Sat, May 30, 2009 at 09:22:39AM +1000, Murray McAllister wrote: > On Sat, May 30, 2009 at 3:13 AM, Eric Christensen > <eric@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Thanks to Jack and Paul for stepping up and really getting the release > > announcement[1] built. We, at Docs, have reviewed the final draft and > > think we are in consensus that it is complete. Please look over it > > and see if anything jumps out at you. If not, this is what we'd like > > to go with. > > > > [1] http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Release_Announcement_for_F11 > > First sentence spells today as "to-day", but maybe that is intended? That's intended, in the spirit of usage in English over a century ago. > Also, there are spaces after "..." and the capital letter following. I removed the ellipses since they really didn't indicate anything in particular. I suppose I could go read up and find out how they were used idiomatically way back when, but it didn't seem vital. -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ irc.freenode.net: stickster @ #fedora-docs, #fedora-devel, #fredlug -- fedora-docs-list mailing list fedora-docs-list@xxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe: https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-docs-list
