On Sat, 30 May 2009, Murray McAllister wrote:
> On Sat, May 30, 2009 at 3:13 AM, Eric Christensen
> <eric@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> > Thanks to Jack and Paul for stepping up and really getting the
> > release announcement[1] built. We, at Docs, have reviewed the
> > final draft and think we are in consensus that it is complete.
> > Please look over it and see if anything jumps out at you. If
> > not, this is what we'd like to go with.
> >
> > [1] http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Release_Announcement_for_F11
>
> First sentence spells today as "to-day", but maybe that is intended?
> Also, there are spaces after "..." and the capital letter following.
the impending roar of the lion ...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aa2umu1vILI
or something like that.
rday
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