On Sat, May 30, 2009 at 3:13 AM, Eric Christensen <eric@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Thanks to Jack and Paul for stepping up and really getting the release > announcement[1] built. We, at Docs, have reviewed the final draft and > think we are in consensus that it is complete. Please look over it > and see if anything jumps out at you. If not, this is what we'd like > to go with. > > [1] http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Release_Announcement_for_F11 First sentence spells today as "to-day", but maybe that is intended? Also, there are spaces after "..." and the capital letter following. Cheers! -- fedora-docs-list mailing list fedora-docs-list@xxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe: https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-docs-list
