On Tue, 2008-09-09 at 10:31 +1000, Christopher Curran wrote: > Paul W. Frields wrote: > > On Mon, 2008-09-08 at 14:24 +1000, Christopher Curran wrote: > > > >> Karsten 'quaid' Wade wrote: > >> > >>> Any comments on this? > >>> > >>> http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Infrastructure/AccountSystem#Account_Termination > >>> > >>> Mike is setting some policy[1] as per a thread on f-advisory-board[2]. > >>> > >>> [1] http://www.redhat.com/archives/fedora-advisory-board/2008-September/msg00001.html > >>> [2] http://www.redhat.com/archives/fedora-advisory-board/2008-August/msg00122.html > >>> > >>> Feel free to edit that content if you see something that is clear, or > >>> send your comments back here. I believe Mike is subscribed to this > >>> list, so we can get his input when needed. > >>> > >>> - Karsten > >>> > >>> > >> Line 2: > >> > >> These freedoms, however, do not include the right to deceive, > >> manipulate or otherwise *change* the processes and procedures Fedora > >> has in place. > >> > >> > >> So the rules can never change, those with power never leave and anyone > >> who questions them is out? I'd consider revising to make it less > >> transcendental and more concrete. Add detailed boundaries of what is > >> wrong and why it is harmful. For example: vandalism, deliberately > >> creating security issues, self promotion, harassment, and so on. > >> > > > > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Infrastructure/AccountSystem#Account_Termination > > > > I made a couple changes -- see if that helps. I am not necessarily in > > favor of detailing specific violations because our definitions may > > differ (or be incorrect). I don't believe it's vital that we do so, > > either, in order to retain the rights to terminate accounts. > > Nevertheless, I'm going to shoot a note to Fedora Legal to see whether > > any further text might be required. > > > > > There is still a lot of fake legalese verbosity in the paragraph. Most > people don't speak legalese, many have no understanding what you are on > about after you start speaking it. Sum it up. > ----- > Fedora project reserves the right to terminate accounts used > maliciously. Accounts may be terminated for: > * maliciously violating or circumventing fedora project's procedures. > * using multiple accounts without permission. > * deliberate damage to the openness, transparency, and equality of the > fedora project. > ----- > That's about all that needs to be there anything else is just padding. > Don't use ten words for something you can say in two. Good points all. I take it you're not inclined to exercise the power of wiki editing for some reason then? ;-) -- Paul W. Frields gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://paul.frields.org/ - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ irc.freenode.net: stickster @ #fedora-docs, #fedora-devel, #fredlug
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