Re: Updated Server Guide for Fedora Core 5

["Basil Copeland" <blcjr2@xxxxxxxxx>]

I've used earlier versions of this document.  It is certainly good
"as is," but if brought into the FDP and edited along the lines
suggested by Paul, it would get better.  I know that's asking for
more out of the author, but with the proffer of help from Paul and
others, maybe it wouldn't be too much to ask.

On 6/30/06, Paul W. Frields <stickster@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:

Sorry to reply to myself, but in all my editorial blustering and
buffoonery, I not only mixed up my footnote ordering while revising my
reply, but failed to actually include the footnote URLs at all. :-(
(Something tells me a better email composer would help here.)  Here they
are, with the antecedents included:

> 1.  The document is licensed as CC BY-NC-SA, so you would need to
> relicense it as OPL 1.0 [2] for the Fedora Documentation Project to use
> it.

[2] http://opencontent.org/openpub/

> 2.  The document would benefit from style editing.  If you are
> interested in improving the readability of your document, check a good
> style manual, or even a simple Linux community one like the GNOME
> Documentation Style Guidelines [1].  If you join the FDP and relicense
> the doc for use here, I would be happy to work with you on this.

[1] http://developer.gnome.org/documents/style-guide/index.html

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