On Sat, 2006-07-01 at 15:29 +0100, Timothy Murphy wrote: > Paul W. Frields wrote: > > > On Fri, 2006-06-30 at 16:05 +1000, Miles Brennan wrote: > >> I wrote the "Linux Home Server HOWTO" which is located at > >> http://www.brennan.id.au, and I have just recently updated the > >> documentation for Fedora Core 5, this was an extensive rewrite (with > >> further additional info) for many chapters. > >> > >> The HOWTO is approx 20 chapters which covers all aspects of setting up > >> FC as a home gateway server as a step-by-step guide for beginners to > >> intermediates - yum, bind (with DDNS update conf), ntpd, dhcpd, squid, > >> sendmail, dovecot, spamassassin, clamav (and milter), vsftpd, cups, > >> sshd, mysqld, samba, nfs (and V4), and ldap etc... and a chapter > >> explaining the concepts of iptables/firewall configs. > > > Hi Miles. I took a quick look at your extensive (and commendable!) > > work, and had the following constructive observations: > > > > 1. The document is licensed as CC BY-NC-SA, so you would need to > > relicense it as OPL 1.0 [2] for the Fedora Documentation Project to use > > it. > > > > 2. The document would benefit from style editing. > > While I don't disagree with your comments, > I would be much more enthusiastic about this document. I did use the word "commendable" in there somewhere... ;-) These days, I usually withhold my more blatant and gushing enthusiasm until such time as additional folks step up to help whip these documents into fighting shape. Looking at our contributor list[1], I see a lot of names that popped up for roughly five minutes on the mailing list and then were never seen again. Would you be interested in joining in the effort[2]? Your enthusiasm could be contagious if followed up with some elbow grease! :-) = = = [1] http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/Contributors [2] http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/NewWriters -- Paul W. Frields, RHCE http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 Fedora Project Board: http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Board Fedora Documentation Project: http://fedora.redhat.com/projects/docs/
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