On Wed, 2004-09-15 at 15:19, Paul W. Frields wrote: > On Wed, 2004-09-15 at 17:38, Mark Johnson wrote: > > Brock Organ wrote: > > > On Wed, 2004-09-15 at 16:52 -0400, Tammy Fox wrote: > > > > > >>I was about to add the common draft notice file from bug #132415, but I > > >>wanted to discuss the wording of the notice a bit more. (This was > > >>discussed on the Hardening Doc Preview thread, but I am starting a new > > >>one with a more appropriate subject.) > > >> > > >>Thoughts? > > > > > > > > > sounds good to me ... > > > > Me, too. A nice improvement:) > > I also like this! +1 for a complete consensus :) > The URL <http://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=######> > always works in my experience (for non-restricted bugs of course). If > the writer uses too long a URL, the editor can fix it without a problem. > > Or for that matter, I suppose we could have a common entity: > > <!ENTITY SYSTEM BZ-Q > "http://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id="> > > And in the writer's doc: > > <!ENTITY SYSTEM BUG-URL "&BZ-Q;######"> Strike SYSTEM from that usage. > > But maybe that's just too much work? Not sure. Seems simpler to go with a locally defined entity that is the bug #. FWIW, this works: http://bugzilla.redhat.com/XXXXXX I think Mark is thinking of a pre-filled bug report such as the one that I use for the SELinux FAQ. For getting proper feedback, it is invaluable -- it prefills the product, version, and component, sets the blocker bug and assigned to, suggests a useful title-style, should have the latest version number embedded already, and has specific suggestions for filling out a bug report unique to this project. However, it looks like this: https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/enter_bug.cgi?product=Fedora%20Core&op_sys=Linux&version=fc3test2&component=fedora-docs&component_text=&rep_platform=All&priority=normal&bug_severity=normal&bug_status=NEW&assigned_to=kwade%40redhat.com&cc=&estimated_time=0.0&bug_file_loc=http%3A%2F%2Fpeople.redhat.com%2Fkwade%2Ffedora-docs%2Fselinux-faq-en%2F&short_desc=SELinux%20FAQ%20-%20%5Bsummarize%20FAQ%20change%20or%20addition%5D&comment=Description%20of%20change%2FFAQ%20addition.%20%20If%20a%20change%2C%20include%20the%20original%0D%0Atext%20first%2C%20then%20the%20changed%20text%3A%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0AVersion-Release%20of%20FAQ%20%28found%20on%0D%0Ahttp%3A%2F%2Fpeople.redhat.com%2Fkwade%2Ffedora-docs%2Fselinux-faq-en%2Fln-legalnotice.html%29%3A%0D%0A%0D%0A%20for%20example%3A%20selinux-faq-1.3%20%282004-09-15-T04%3A20-0800%29%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0A&keywords=&dependson=&blocked=118757%20%20&maketemplate=Remember%20values%20as%20bookmarkable%20templ! ate&form_name=enter_bug I use a <ulink/> with descriptive link text. :) How about: 1. If it is just a link to the bug report, then: <!ENTITY BUG-URL "http://bugzilla.redhat.com/XXXXXX"> usage: <ulink url="&BUG-URL;"/> 2. If it is a Really Long URL, then following the same solution to define the entity, but usage is: <ulink url="BUG-URL;">pre-filled bug report</ulink> NOTE - if you use a long URL that includes '&' characters, you _must_ change them to & in the XML so that they process into the correct characters when rendered. - Karsten -- Karsten Wade, RHCE, Tech Writer a lemon is just a melon in disguise http://people.redhat.com/kwade/ gpg fingerprint: 2680 DBFD D968 3141 0115 5F1B D992 0E06 AD0E 0C41