Dne 25.11.2013 13:59, Christian Fredrik Kalager Schaller napsal(a):
Hi everyone,
First of all apologize for this taking so long, I ended up traveling
non-stop for some time visiting some of Red Hats desktop customers.
While not directly tied to the work of this working group I do hope to
take some of the lessons learned from those meetings with me into the
future work of the working group.
Anyway I tried editing the PRD a bit based on the feedback we got on the
first draft. I tried to make a few items a bit clearer and also to
include spelling fixes contributed and so on.
We probably want to do another WG meeting soon to discuss next steps.
Feel free to let me know if I forgot to include some important feedback
or if further clarifications are needed.
Christian
<quote>
3rd party software
Fedora Workstation will work with partners and ISVs to ensure that their
software can be easily installed on the system after installation.
</quote>
"installed ... after installation" sounds a bit clumsy and not entirely
clear to me
<quote>
Work towards standardizing and unifying the Linux desktop space
We want to use and develop technologies that can be widely shared with
the rest of the community and we want to allow developers to use the
tools they prefer for their application development yet make them all
feel like a natural fit into our integrated desktop experience.
</quote>
"integrated desktop experience" - again unclear to me, perhaps worth
expanding a bit, I can't imagine precisely what this means
<quote>
We will try to announce and plan these things well in advance, but
putting up a public timeline, but of course resources and changing
market conditions might make changes to the plans necessary on an
ongoing basis.
</quote>
"but putting up a public timeline" shouldn't that be "by putting up"?
<quote>
... but it they will be ..
</quote>
remove the "it"
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