Máirín Duffy wrote:
Rahul Sundaram wrote:
Fluffy, yea but but the text you have has two issues that I can spot.
Defining Linux as the operating system instead of Fedora as a Linux
based operating system runs us straight into the Linux vs GNU/Linux
debate which we have carefully sidestepped before.
People know what "Linux" is.
Right. Changing from "Fedora is a linux operating system" to "Fedora is
a Linux based operating system" doesn't change that.
The last sentence "leading edge" is too close to "bleeding edge". I
would like to emphasize a bit more on robustness too.
I disagree on that point but then again I'm not a professional writer.
Well I am, atleast technically. Karsten?
Rahul
