Re: Website update

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Rahul Sundaram wrote:
Fluffy, yea but but the text you have has two issues that I can spot. Defining Linux as the operating system instead of Fedora as a Linux based operating system runs us straight into the Linux vs GNU/Linux debate which we have carefully sidestepped before.

People know what "Linux" is.

The last sentence "leading edge" is too close to "bleeding edge". I would like to emphasize a bit more on robustness too.

I disagree on that point but then again I'm not a professional writer.

~m


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