Another thing that slipped by in that article was the use of 'curl <URL> | sudo bash', which is a big security no-no. We have 'dnf' and repositories to install the software people need. Be aware of commands and what they do, so we're not giving users bad advice. :-) I fixed this. Paul On Fri, Apr 10, 2020 at 11:39 AM Paul Frields <stickster@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Hey guys, > > I just saw the JavaScript REST API article pop up. There were a lot of > weird things left in the article like odd punctuation, incomplete > sentences, and other issues. Here is some advice for editing I wanted > to pass along, so that articles continue to look professional and > helpful: > > * Do check proper grammar and style in all sentences. You can use a > service like Grammarly (https://grammarly.com) if helpful. > > * Ensure the article follows our Tips for Writers, for formatting and : > https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-magazine/tips-for-writers/ > These may be originally designed for writers, but our job as editors > is to make sure articles are consistent across the Magazine, which > helps readers be confident about our content. > > * Check that everything works in the order described, and is clearly > explained. If you don't get it, readers may not either! > > * Fill out the SEO bits -- including a focus keyword and a short > synopsis that shows up in search engines like Google. Without these, > articles are less likely to be seen, and pageviews decrease. > > HTH, > Paul _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
