Much more thanks to Stephen for providing an article. 🙂 -- Gregory Lee Bartholomew PGP Key ID: 3B67510E On March 11, 2020 1:20:24 PM UTC, Stephen Snow <s40w5s@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: >Yes, thanks to Gregory >On Wed, 2020-03-11 at 07:09 +0100, Adam Samalik wrote: >> Great work! Thanks for saving the day! >> >> Scheduled. >> >> >> On Wed, Mar 11, 2020 at 12:03 AM Gregory Lee Bartholomew < >> gregory.lee.bartholomew@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: >> > I've added an image to it, but it is not scheduled because I could >> > not find the >> > >> > button to do so in Wordpress. >> > >> > >> > >> > Adam: Hopefully you can take care of any last minute tweaking and >> > schedule it >> > >> > sometime before 8:00AM tomorrow. >> > >> > >> > >> > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 16:44 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote: >> > >> > > No problem. I've removed the links. Just let me know if you spot >> > anything else, >> > >> > > no matter how small. It is much easier to update now than after >> > it goes live. >> > >> > > >> > >> > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:06 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote: >> > >> > > > Yeah the SEO score is something is difficult sometimes. I don't >> > usually >> > >> > > > sweat it too much as long as the read is okay. Didn't read the >> > tips, >> > >> > > > just started writing, but I'll take your word for it. >> > >> > > > >> > >> > > > The article looks okay, the only thing is there is a link that >> > >> > > > shouldn't be one (http://localhost:8080/logo.html) is meant to >> > be >> > >> > > > something typed in the browser url entry. Maybe it's a WP thing >> > though >> > >> > > > I didn't notice it before. >> > >> > > > >> > >> > > > Thanks Gregory >> > >> > > > >> > >> > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 15:45 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew >> > wrote: >> > >> > > > > Hi Stephen: >> > >> > > > > >> > >> > > > > I've made a first pass on editing your article. I'm trying to >> > bring >> > >> > > > > it into >> > >> > > > > better compliance with the guidelines posted here (e.g. using >> > >> > > > > sentence case >> > >> > > > > instead of title case): >> > >> > > > > >> > >> > > > > >> > >https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-magazine/tips-for-writers/ >> > >> > > > > >> > >> > > > > I prefer title case myself, but the guidelines recommend >> > using >> > >> > > > > sentence case for >> > >> > > > > the section titles (even though they aren't sentences :P) >> > >> > > > > >> > >> > > > > Also, I've tried to reword a few things to be in the >> > imperative tense >> > >> > > > > to make >> > >> > > > > the SEO score a little better. It is very hard to make SEO >> > happy. I >> > >> > > > > don't think >> > >> > > > > it is really designed for scoring technical articles. >> > >> > > > > >> > >> > > > > Can you view the current version of your article here?: >> > >> > > > > >> > >> > > > > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=30428&preview=1&_ppp=5d183dabb1 >> > >> > > > > >> > >> > > > > Feel free to suggest rewording of anything that you think >> > might be >> > >> > > > > poorly or >> > >> > > > > incorrectly worded. I'm going to start working on the image >> > now. >> > >> > > > > >> > >> > > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:52 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote: >> > >> > > > > > Hello Gregory, >> > >> > > > > > >> > >> > > > > > No I haven't an idea what image to use for it. Sorry, I >> > know that's >> > >> > > > > > not >> > >> > > > > > a great help. It is a container focused platform, and suits >> > >> > > > > > Silverblue >> > >> > > > > > (and CoreOS) with either Docker or Podman centric container >> > >> > > > > > build/run >> > >> > > > > > options. Perhaps something from the container world would >> > be >> > >> > > > > > suitable. >> > >> > > > > > >> > >> > > > > > Stephen >> > >> > > > > > >> > >> > > > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 12:11 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew >> > wrote: >> > >> > > > > > > Thanks Stephen. I'll give it a once over and then request >> > your >> > >> > > > > > > feedback. In the >> > >> > > > > > > meantime, do you have any ideas for the image? >> > >> > > > > > > >> > >> > > > > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:05 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote: >> > >> > > > > > > > If you need me to revise anything please advise me, I'm >> > around >> > >> > > > > > > > to >> > >> > > > > > > > take >> > >> > > > > > > > care of it. >> > >> > > > > > > > >> > >> > > > > > > > Stephen >> > >> > > > > > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 11:58 -0500, Gregory Lee >> > Bartholomew >> > >> > > > > > > > wrote: >> > >> > > > > > > > > This one looks pretty easy and I could use the >> > practice >> > >> > > > > > > > > anyway, >> > >> > > > > > > > > so >> > >> > > > > > > > > I'll give it >> > >> > > > > > > > > a try. >> > >> > > > > > > > > >> > >> > > > > > > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:46 +0100, Adam Samalik >> > wrote: >> > >> > > > > > > > > > Hi all, >> > >> > > > > > > > > > >> > >> > > > > > > > > > I promised an article for Wednesday about one of >> > the >> > >> > > > > > > > > > desktops >> > >> > > > > > > > > > from >> > >> > > > > > > > > > Troy's >> > >> > > > > > > > > > article [1], but other things slipped and I won't >> > be able >> > >> > > > > > > > > > to do >> > >> > > > > > > > > > that. :( >> > >> > > > > > > > > > >> > >> > > > > > > > > > However, there is this Quarkus article [2] ready to >> > be >> > >> > > > > > > > > > reviewed! >> > >> > > > > > > > > > Would >> > >> > > > > > > > > > anyone be able to give it an edit and an image, so >> > it's >> > >> > > > > > > > > > ready >> > >> > > > > > > > > > for >> > >> > > > > > > > > > tomorrow? >> > >> > > > > > > > > > >> > >> > > > > > > > > > As a backup, I could try to do that in the morning >> > if time >> > >> > > > > > > > > > allows. >> > >> > > > > > > > > > >> > >> > > > > > > > > > Thanks! >> > >> > > > > > > > > > Adam >> > >> > > > > > > > > > >> > >> > > > > > > > > > [1] >> > https://fedoramagazine.org/fedoras-gaggle-of-desktops/ >> > >> > > > > > > > > > [2] >> > >> > > > > > > > > > >> > >https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/140?kanban-status=196 >> > >> > > > > > > > > > >> > >> > > > > > > > > > -- >> > >> > > > > > > > > > >> > >> > > > > > > > > > Adam Šamalík >> > >> > > > > > > > > > --------------------------- >> > >> > > > > > > > > > Senior Software Engineer >> > >> > > > > > > > > > Red Hat >> > >> > > > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ >> > >> > > > > > > > > > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- >> > >> > > > > > > > > > magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx >> > >> > > > > > > > > > To unsubscribe send an email to >> > >> > > > > > > > > > magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx >> > >> > > > > > > > > > Fedora Code of Conduct: >> > >> > > > > > > > > > >> > https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ >> > >> > > > > > > > > > List Guidelines: >> > >> > > > > > > > > > >> > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines >> > >> > > > > > > > > > List Archives: >> > >> > > > > > > > > > >> > >https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx >> > >> > > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ >> > >> > > > > > > > > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- >> > >> > > > > > > > > magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx >> > >> > > > > > > > > To unsubscribe send an email to >> > >> > > > > > > > > magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx >> > >> > > > > > > > > Fedora Code of Conduct: >> > >> > > > > > > > > >> > https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ >> > >> > > > > > > > > List Guidelines: >> > >> > > > > > > > > >> > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines >> > >> > > > > > > > > List Archives: >> > >> > > > > > > > > >> > >https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx >> > >> > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ >> > >> > > > > > > > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- >> > >> > > > > > > > magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx >> > >> > > > > > > > To unsubscribe send an email to >> > >> > > > > > > > magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx >> > >> > > > > > > > Fedora Code of Conduct: >> > >> > > > > > > > >> > https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ >> > >> > > > > > > > List Guidelines: >> > >> > > > > > > > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines >> > >> > > > > > > > List Archives: >> > >> > > > > > > > >> > >https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx >> > >> > >> > >> >> _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
