Hi Stephen: I've made a first pass on editing your article. I'm trying to bring it into better compliance with the guidelines posted here (e.g. using sentence case instead of title case): https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-magazine/tips-for-writers/ I prefer title case myself, but the guidelines recommend using sentence case for the section titles (even though they aren't sentences :P) Also, I've tried to reword a few things to be in the imperative tense to make the SEO score a little better. It is very hard to make SEO happy. I don't think it is really designed for scoring technical articles. Can you view the current version of your article here?: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=30428&preview=1&_ppp=5d183dabb1 Feel free to suggest rewording of anything that you think might be poorly or incorrectly worded. I'm going to start working on the image now. On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:52 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote: > Hello Gregory, > > No I haven't an idea what image to use for it. Sorry, I know that's not > a great help. It is a container focused platform, and suits Silverblue > (and CoreOS) with either Docker or Podman centric container build/run > options. Perhaps something from the container world would be suitable. > > Stephen > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 12:11 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote: > > Thanks Stephen. I'll give it a once over and then request your > > feedback. In the > > meantime, do you have any ideas for the image? > > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:05 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote: > > > If you need me to revise anything please advise me, I'm around to > > > take > > > care of it. > > > > > > Stephen > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 11:58 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote: > > > > This one looks pretty easy and I could use the practice anyway, > > > > so > > > > I'll give it > > > > a try. > > > > > > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:46 +0100, Adam Samalik wrote: > > > > > Hi all, > > > > > > > > > > I promised an article for Wednesday about one of the desktops > > > > > from > > > > > Troy's > > > > > article [1], but other things slipped and I won't be able to do > > > > > that. :( > > > > > > > > > > However, there is this Quarkus article [2] ready to be > > > > > reviewed! > > > > > Would > > > > > anyone be able to give it an edit and an image, so it's ready > > > > > for > > > > > tomorrow? > > > > > > > > > > As a backup, I could try to do that in the morning if time > > > > > allows. > > > > > > > > > > Thanks! > > > > > Adam > > > > > > > > > > [1] https://fedoramagazine.org/fedoras-gaggle-of-desktops/ > > > > > [2] > > > > > https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/140?kanban-status=196 > > > > > > > > > > -- > > > > > > > > > > Adam Šamalík > > > > > --------------------------- > > > > > Senior Software Engineer > > > > > Red Hat > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > > > > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- > > > > > magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > > > To unsubscribe send an email to > > > > > magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > > > Fedora Code of Conduct: > > > > > https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ > > > > > List Guidelines: > > > > > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > > > > > List Archives: > > > > > https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > > _______________________________________________ > > > > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > > To unsubscribe send an email to > > > > magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > > Fedora Code of Conduct: > > > > https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ > > > > List Guidelines: > > > > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > > > > List Archives: > > > > https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > _______________________________________________ > > > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > To unsubscribe send an email to > > > magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > Fedora Code of Conduct: > > > https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ > > > List Guidelines: > > > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > > > List Archives: > > > https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
