No problem. I've removed the links. Just let me know if you spot anything else, no matter how small. It is much easier to update now than after it goes live. On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:06 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote: > Yeah the SEO score is something is difficult sometimes. I don't usually > sweat it too much as long as the read is okay. Didn't read the tips, > just started writing, but I'll take your word for it. > > The article looks okay, the only thing is there is a link that > shouldn't be one (http://localhost:8080/logo.html) is meant to be > something typed in the browser url entry. Maybe it's a WP thing though > I didn't notice it before. > > Thanks Gregory > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 15:45 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote: > > Hi Stephen: > > > > I've made a first pass on editing your article. I'm trying to bring > > it into > > better compliance with the guidelines posted here (e.g. using > > sentence case > > instead of title case): > > > > https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-magazine/tips-for-writers/ > > > > I prefer title case myself, but the guidelines recommend using > > sentence case for > > the section titles (even though they aren't sentences :P) > > > > Also, I've tried to reword a few things to be in the imperative tense > > to make > > the SEO score a little better. It is very hard to make SEO happy. I > > don't think > > it is really designed for scoring technical articles. > > > > Can you view the current version of your article here?: > > > > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=30428&preview=1&_ppp=5d183dabb1 > > > > Feel free to suggest rewording of anything that you think might be > > poorly or > > incorrectly worded. I'm going to start working on the image now. > > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:52 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote: > > > Hello Gregory, > > > > > > No I haven't an idea what image to use for it. Sorry, I know that's > > > not > > > a great help. It is a container focused platform, and suits > > > Silverblue > > > (and CoreOS) with either Docker or Podman centric container > > > build/run > > > options. Perhaps something from the container world would be > > > suitable. > > > > > > Stephen > > > > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 12:11 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote: > > > > Thanks Stephen. I'll give it a once over and then request your > > > > feedback. In the > > > > meantime, do you have any ideas for the image? > > > > > > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:05 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote: > > > > > If you need me to revise anything please advise me, I'm around > > > > > to > > > > > take > > > > > care of it. > > > > > > > > > > Stephen > > > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 11:58 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew > > > > > wrote: > > > > > > This one looks pretty easy and I could use the practice > > > > > > anyway, > > > > > > so > > > > > > I'll give it > > > > > > a try. > > > > > > > > > > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:46 +0100, Adam Samalik wrote: > > > > > > > Hi all, > > > > > > > > > > > > > > I promised an article for Wednesday about one of the > > > > > > > desktops > > > > > > > from > > > > > > > Troy's > > > > > > > article [1], but other things slipped and I won't be able > > > > > > > to do > > > > > > > that. :( > > > > > > > > > > > > > > However, there is this Quarkus article [2] ready to be > > > > > > > reviewed! > > > > > > > Would > > > > > > > anyone be able to give it an edit and an image, so it's > > > > > > > ready > > > > > > > for > > > > > > > tomorrow? > > > > > > > > > > > > > > As a backup, I could try to do that in the morning if time > > > > > > > allows. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Thanks! > > > > > > > Adam > > > > > > > > > > > > > > [1] https://fedoramagazine.org/fedoras-gaggle-of-desktops/ > > > > > > > [2] > > > > > > > https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/140?kanban-status=196 > > > > > > > > > > > > > > -- > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Adam Šamalík > > > > > > > --------------------------- > > > > > > > Senior Software Engineer > > > > > > > Red Hat > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > > > > > > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- > > > > > > > magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > > > > > To unsubscribe send an email to > > > > > > > magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > > > > > Fedora Code of Conduct: > > > > > > > https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ > > > > > > > List Guidelines: > > > > > > > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > > > > > > > List Archives: > > > > > > > https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > > > > > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- > > > > > > magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > > > > To unsubscribe send an email to > > > > > > magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > > > > Fedora Code of Conduct: > > > > > > https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ > > > > > > List Guidelines: > > > > > > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > > > > > > List Archives: > > > > > > https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > > > > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- > > > > > magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > > > To unsubscribe send an email to > > > > > magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > > > Fedora Code of Conduct: > > > > > https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ > > > > > List Guidelines: > > > > > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > > > > > List Archives: > > > > > https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
