You did a great job, Steven! Nothing to worry about. The article is out now. We all keep an eye on comments over the course of the day, so don't feel like you need to be glued to a screen. Thank you, Greg, and Alessio for the content. Paul On Fri, Mar 8, 2019 at 8:23 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Hi Paul, > > I would have published last night but I am still uncertain of my > boundaries in this role. I did get some of what GB wanted in there and I > think it can go ahead and we can deal with the fallout of questions. > I'll keep an eye on it later this afternoon. I have to go out in the > real world a bit this day to work on machinery. The article length is a > concern and it is due to the subject matter. It probably should have > been two articles, one on grub2 and one on the (various) methods for > achieving the goal of booting into a fedora install via grub. Just my > opinion there. I was worrying over the "analysis paralysis" too. > > Steve > > > On 08/03/19 08:14 AM, Paul Frields wrote: > > Thanks Steven. This article was intended to go out today (Friday) and > > usually we publish at 0800 UTC (3am US/Eastern). Don't worry, it's not > > a disaster or anything, just a note for schedule awareness. It's more > > helpful to push out an article we're 90% happy with than spend days or > > more worrying about very fine details. I agree with you about length > > in this case, so I'm going to do a quick check and push the article > > out so we don't get into "analysis paralysis." > > > > Paul > > > > On Thu, Mar 7, 2019 at 10:46 PM Steven Snow <s40w5s@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > >> Hi, > >> > >> I have made the changes as far as I could tonight. If you think there > >> needs more polishing I am starting my day early tomorrow so I'll check > >> in on this. > >> > >> Regards > >> > >> Steve > >> > >> > >> On 07/03/19 02:12 PM, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote: > >>> I think there might be a small technical issue that you should double-check with > >>> the author about. In the "Add a new menu entry to GRUB" section, a sample grub > >>> menuentry is provided and the following paragraph states, "Please change the > >>> values (UUID, ...". But there is no example UUID or a placeholder for where one > >>> should go as was done with <IP>, <Gateway>, etc. > >>> > >>> Personally, I'd like to see a little more explanation about what the various > >>> commands ("insmod ext2", "--hint='hd0,msdos1'", etc.) are doing and how they > >>> might need to be changed to match the reader's environment ("Is your boot > >>> partition formatted with a FAT filesystem on a GPT partition table? If so, ..." > >>> etc.). > >>> > >>> Some sort of troubleshooting section at the end "would be nice" as well. In > >>> particular, a short section showing how you might be able to recover from a > >>> system that boots into a grub shell. For example, something like: > >>> > >>> If your configuration fails and you get a "grub>" shell prompt, you can try to > >>> load your backup configuration with the following commands: > >>> > >>> grub> ls > >>> (hd0), (hd0,gpt1), (hd0,gpt2) > >>> grub> ls (hd0,gpt1)/ > >>> efi/ grub2/ initramfs.img vmlinuz > >>> grub> ls (hd0,gpt1)/grub2 > >>> device.map grub.cfg grub.cfg.bak > >>> grub> configfile (hd0,gpt1)/grub2/grub.cfg.bak > >>> > >>> Again, this is just my personal opinion about how the article could be improved. > >>> A countervailing view might be that giving the reader too much information might > >>> scare them away. > >>> > >>> Anyway, just some ideas, feel free to take it or leave it, > >>> gb > >>> > >>> On Thu, 2019-03-07 at 12:28 -0500, Steven Snow wrote: > >>>> Hello Editorial Board, > >>>> > >>>> Could someone take a look at the following to give a once over for > >>>> things I may have missed? This is regarding the article that was > >>>> supposed to publish Monday. the post is here > >>>> https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25356&preview=true&preview_id=25356 , > >>>> hopefully the preview works for you. > >>>> > >>>> Thank you and regards, > >>>> > >>>> Steve > >>>> > >>>> > >>>> On 06/03/19 05:00 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote: > >>>>> Minutes: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-03-06/magazine.2019-03-06-21.00.html > >>>>> Minutes (text): https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-03-06/magazine.2019-03-06-21.00.txt > >>>>> Log: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-03-06/magazine.2019-03-06-21.00.log.html > >>>>> > >>>>> * * * > >>>>> ========================================= > >>>>> #fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board > >>>>> ========================================= > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> Meeting started by stickster at 21:00:08 UTC. The full logs are > >>>>> available at > >>>>> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-03-06/magazine.2019-03-06-21.00.log.html > >>>>> . > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> Meeting summary > >>>>> --------------- > >>>>> * Roll call (stickster, 21:00:14) > >>>>> > >>>>> * Last week's stats (stickster, 21:04:49) > >>>>> * Week of February 25: 67.4K pageviews, slighly up from week before > >>>>> and moderate performance overall (stickster, 21:05:30) > >>>>> * Month of February 2019: 272.6K pageviews, very slightly up YoY (only > >>>>> about 1K or 0.4%) (stickster, 21:06:33) > >>>>> * ACTION: jakfrost do final copy edit on GRUB article with > >>>>> gregbartholomew and schedule for Friday (stickster, 21:14:43) > >>>>> > >>>>> * Drafts to review (stickster, 21:15:43) > >>>>> * LINK: > >>>>> https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&post_type=post > >>>>> (stickster, 21:15:49) > >>>>> * --- C# part 2 --- (stickster, 21:15:56) > >>>>> * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25106&preview=true (stickster, > >>>>> 21:16:01) > >>>>> * ACTION: stickster see if C# author will beef up with more actionable > >>>>> content (stickster, 21:26:40) > >>>>> * stickster just figured out the problem with the images -- you need > >>>>> to specify in the right-side settings that the image links --> media > >>>>> file so the full size comes up when someone clicks the thumbnail in > >>>>> the article (stickster, 21:37:16) > >>>>> * stickster fixed the problems in the JDK article (stickster, > >>>>> 21:37:32) > >>>>> > >>>>> * Publishing schedule (stickster, 21:45:34) > >>>>> * We're running dry, need ideas + writers to do them! 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