Hi Clement Thanks for your suggestions on points. *Will add some explanation at the very begning *Will clarify real and virtual memory usage including simple and complex flow. Thanks Ashutosh On Thu, 2018-01-11 at 20:44 +0100, Clement Verna wrote: > Hi Ashutosh, as Paul mentioned we came up with a few ideas on how > your > article could be improved. > > We thought that : > > * It would be good to have more explanation of processes in the > introduction. The fact that they are numbered and belong to users, > etc > ... That would make it clear why someone would want to use ps to see > the process list. > > * The explanation of fields is good, but explaining for instance real > vs. virtual memory usage is needed so that the reader get a better > understanding of each field and what they mean. > > * It would be great if the examples followed a "simple --> complex" > flow, and focused on real-world common uses > > Let me know what do you think of these feedback. > > I am also happy to help if needed. > > Thanks > Clement > > On 11 January 2018 at 19:58, Paul W. Frields <stickster@xxxxxxxxx> > wrote: > > On Fri, Jan 05, 2018 at 12:23:59PM +0530, Ashutosh Bhakare wrote: > > > Hello > > > > > > First of all apologize for marking article as a Pitch in place of > > > Draft. > > > > > > I have added few points to the article https://fedoramagazine.org > > > /?p=19 > > > 784&preview=true&preview_id=19784 yestarday > > > > > > while writing this article i have releazied i can split it into > > > two > > > article, Part 1 (current) will contains basic of ps and its > > > usage. Part > > > II (proposed) will contain kill, pgrep, pkill and top as a part > > > of > > > process management tools. > > > > > > Please review the draft and let me know your inputs. > > > > Hi Ashutosh, we discussed this in yesterday's editorial meeting. > > There are some changes we'd like to see -- Clément (cc'd) will > > reach > > out to you, and you're welcome to coordinate on this list so others > > can learn from the changes. > > > > > > -- > > Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields. > > org/ > > gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 > > 3717 > > http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.or > > g/ > > The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
