Hi Ashutosh, as Paul mentioned we came up with a few ideas on how your article could be improved. We thought that : * It would be good to have more explanation of processes in the introduction. The fact that they are numbered and belong to users, etc ... That would make it clear why someone would want to use ps to see the process list. * The explanation of fields is good, but explaining for instance real vs. virtual memory usage is needed so that the reader get a better understanding of each field and what they mean. * It would be great if the examples followed a "simple --> complex" flow, and focused on real-world common uses Let me know what do you think of these feedback. I am also happy to help if needed. Thanks Clement On 11 January 2018 at 19:58, Paul W. Frields <stickster@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > On Fri, Jan 05, 2018 at 12:23:59PM +0530, Ashutosh Bhakare wrote: >> Hello >> >> First of all apologize for marking article as a Pitch in place of >> Draft. >> >> I have added few points to the article https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=19 >> 784&preview=true&preview_id=19784 yestarday >> >> while writing this article i have releazied i can split it into two >> article, Part 1 (current) will contains basic of ps and its usage. Part >> II (proposed) will contain kill, pgrep, pkill and top as a part of >> process management tools. >> >> Please review the draft and let me know your inputs. > > Hi Ashutosh, we discussed this in yesterday's editorial meeting. > There are some changes we'd like to see -- Clément (cc'd) will reach > out to you, and you're welcome to coordinate on this list so others > can learn from the changes. > > > -- > Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ > gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 > http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ > The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
