On Fri, Jan 05, 2018 at 12:23:59PM +0530, Ashutosh Bhakare wrote: > Hello > > First of all apologize for marking article as a Pitch in place of > Draft. > > I have added few points to the article https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=19 > 784&preview=true&preview_id=19784 yestarday > > while writing this article i have releazied i can split it into two > article, Part 1 (current) will contains basic of ps and its usage. Part > II (proposed) will contain kill, pgrep, pkill and top as a part of > process management tools. > > Please review the draft and let me know your inputs. Hi Ashutosh, we discussed this in yesterday's editorial meeting. There are some changes we'd like to see -- Clément (cc'd) will reach out to you, and you're welcome to coordinate on this list so others can learn from the changes. -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
