On Thu, May 25, 2017 at 09:08:24PM +0100, James Hogarth wrote: > Thanks Paul .. I really appreciate the feedback on readability tips as > it's always an area I struggle in. > > With regards to that paragraph you were unsure about, I really wanted > to link back to our older letsencrypt webroot article and that seemed > a decent way to lead into that. > > I'm of course open to suggestions for a better way of handling it :) Looks like we found a good way to tag a transition onto that paragraph, it's good to go! -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx