On Wed, May 24, 2017 at 12:19:10AM +0100, James Hogarth wrote: > The initial draft is ready for a editorial review. > > I've enabled the public preview link as the certbot developers were > very happy to hear about the article and wanted to take a look and > provide any early feedback. This is great stuff, James. I have it open now and I'm making a few minor readability changes. One hint for future writing: Try to avoid gerunds ("-ing" words), "will" future tense, and other passive voice indicators wherever possible. This makes articles easier to read for everyone, including those who aren't native speakers. -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx