Thanks Paul .. I really appreciate the feedback on readability tips as
it's always an area I struggle in.
With regards to that paragraph you were unsure about, I really wanted
to link back to our older letsencrypt webroot article and that seemed
a decent way to lead into that.
I'm of course open to suggestions for a better way of handling it :)
On 25 May 2017 at 16:30, Paul W. Frields <stickster@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> On Wed, May 24, 2017 at 12:19:10AM +0100, James Hogarth wrote:
>> The initial draft is ready for a editorial review.
>>
>> I've enabled the public preview link as the certbot developers were
>> very happy to hear about the article and wanted to take a look and
>> provide any early feedback.
>
> This is great stuff, James. I have it open now and I'm making a few
> minor readability changes.
>
> One hint for future writing: Try to avoid gerunds ("-ing" words),
> "will" future tense, and other passive voice indicators wherever
> possible. This makes articles easier to read for everyone, including
> those who aren't native speakers.
>
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