I'm not the Official Anaconda Error Message Editor, but I've got a
couple comments.
The one problem is that we're past the string freeze now so we can't
really change them, but you can certainly commit to a local branch and
then cherry-pick over once we have a new development branch open.
> @@ -282,8 +282,8 @@ def runRescue(anaconda, instClass):
> "read-only instead of read-write by choosing 'Read-Only'."
> "\n\n"
> "If for some reason this process fails you can choose 'Skip' "
> - "and this step will be skipped and you will go directly to a "
> - "command shell.\n\n") % (anaconda.rootPath,),
> + "and this step will be skipped and you will go directly to the "
> + "interactive rescue environment.\n\n") % (anaconda.rootPath,),
> [_("Continue"), _("Read-Only"), _("Skip")] )
>
> if rc == string.lower(_("Skip")):
I'd probably change this to say "If this process fails you can choose
'Skip' to go directly to a command shell.". I don't like the "blah and
blah and blah" approach of the current message.
> @@ -344,10 +344,10 @@ def runRescue(anaconda, instClass):
> else:
> ButtonChoiceWindow(screen, _("Rescue"),
> _("Your system had dirty file systems which you chose not "
> - "to mount. Press return to get a shell from which "
> + "to mount. Press return to enter the rescue environment from which "
> "you can fsck and mount your partitions. The system "
> - "will reboot automatically when you exit from the "
> - "shell."), [_("OK")], width = 50)
> + "will reboot automatically when you exit from it "
> + ), [_("OK")], width = 50)
> rootmounted = 0
> else:
> if anaconda.isKickstart:
I'd leave off the "from it" and just have the sentence end "...will
automatically reboot when you exit." This comment applies to all the
other hunks, too.
- Chris
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