This patch fixes a couple minor typos and makes two small changes to the
front-page:
* I think it's not necessary to explicitly say 'Win32 and Win16 APIs'.
Just 'API' should be enough, readers can always get the gritty details
on the features page.
* Do we need to mention 'Intel' or is 'x86-based' enough?
Changelog:
* Fix a couple typos.
* s/Win32 and Win16 APIs/APIs/ as most readers will not be concerned by
the details
* s/Intel (x86 based)/x86-based/, to the point.
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let me know.
<h2>Virtualization Projects</h2>
- Virtualization environmnets tend to stress the host considerably,
+ Virtualization environments tend to stress the host considerably,
due to the inherent impedance mismatch between the two. As such,
they provide very good (and tough) test cases. Having such
virtualization environments run within each other is an important
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{$screenshot}
-<p>Wine is an implementation of the <a href="http://www.microsoft.com/windows/";>Windows</a>
-Win32 and Win16 APIs on top of <a href="http://www.xfree86.org/";>X</a> and
-Unix.</p>
+<p>Wine is an open-source implementation of the <a
+href="http://www.microsoft.com/windows/";>Windows</a> API on top of <a
+href="http://www.xfree86.org/";>X</a> and Unix.</p>
<p>Think of Wine as a Windows compatibility layer. Wine does not require
Microsoft Windows, as it is a completely alternative implementation
consisting of 100% Microsoft-free code, but it can optionally use
native system DLLs if they are available. Wine provides both a development
toolkit (Winelib) for porting Windows sources to Unix and a program loader,
-allowing many unmodified Windows binaries to run under Intel (x86 based)
+allowing many unmodified Windows binaries to run on x86-based
Unixes, including
<a href="http://www.linux.org/";>Linux</a>,
<a href="http://www.freebsd.org/";>FreeBSD</a>, and
<a href="http://www.sun.com/solaris/";>Solaris</a>.</p>
-<p> More information can be read in the articles <a href="?page=why">Why Wine
+<p>More information can be read in the articles <a href="?page=why">Why Wine
is so important</a>, and <a href="?page=myths">Debunking Wine Myths</a>.</p>
<p>The <a href="http://source.winehq.com/source/LICENSE";>licensing terms</a>
-are the <a href="http://source.winehq.org/source/COPYING.LIB";>GNU Lesser General
-Public License</a>.</p>
+are the <a href="http://source.winehq.org/source/COPYING.LIB";>GNU Lesser
+General Public License</a>.</p>
--
Francois Gouget fgouget@free.fr http://fgouget.free.fr/
It really galls me that most of the computer power in the world
is wasted on screen savers.
Chris Caldwell from the GIMPS project
http://www.mersenne.org/prime.htm
