On 2010/06/14 20:26, Fabio Margarido wrote:
On Sat, Jun 12, 2010 at 05:55, Frank Shearar
<frank.shearar@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
"The first is when using a reliable, connection orientated transport
protocol such as TCP, SIP has an inherent mechanism ..." rewrite as:
"The first is that when SIP uses a reliable, connection orientated transport
protocol such as TCP, it has an inherent mechanism ...
Shouldn't it be "The first is when using a reliable, connection
oriented transport (...)"?
Well, I had to reread that sentence a number of times before I could
figure out the structure, never mind what it was saying.
Looking at my suggestion again, perhaps this is an improvement:
The first is when SIP uses a reliable, connection orientated transport
protocol such as TCP. In this case, SIP has an inherent mechanism ...
and then start the last sentence of the paragraph like so:
The second case is when SIP uses an unreliable transport protocol such
as UDP, where ...
frank
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